Dubel
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Let's not and say we did.
Let's not and say we did.
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soulfiend
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"Nice one centurion! Like it, Like it!
But where's the rest? How does it continue?
Don't you dare let us wait for a sequel...
Although I'll need to read it again, I found one tiny mistake:
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"The armed Rogue put her bow away. Her companion drew a dagger and charged at the stranger from behind. He whirled around and landed a blow right on the Sister’s chin; the snap of breaking bones was only briefly interrupted by a pained cry as the Rogue was thrown backwards.
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I'm not quite sure, but if you break someones neck doesn't he/she does not make any sound?
Well now, I'm gonna read on now and I guess you continue as well
But where's the rest? How does it continue?
Don't you dare let us wait for a sequel...
Although I'll need to read it again, I found one tiny mistake:
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"The armed Rogue put her bow away. Her companion drew a dagger and charged at the stranger from behind. He whirled around and landed a blow right on the Sister’s chin; the snap of breaking bones was only briefly interrupted by a pained cry as the Rogue was thrown backwards.
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I'm not quite sure, but if you break someones neck doesn't he/she does not make any sound?
Well now, I'm gonna read on now and I guess you continue as well
Dubel
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Oh my, a reply 
First off, I'm very glad indeed you liked it 
As I'm currently working on one and a half new D2-related tales, I really can't see myself revisiting this one. The entire premise doesn't really appeal to me anymore, I'm afraid. Sorry
It is implied, of course. I can't recall exactly what I was thinking there; the scene as a whole strikes me as somewhat poorly thought-out nowadays anyway, and in dire need of being rewritten. (Attacking some stranger with a dagger? Worst Rogue ever!) Which of course won't happen. Probably. 
First off, I'm very glad indeed you liked it Well, as I said this was written some seven years ago. For various reasons I ended up abandoning the story after that last chapter, mostly because I ran out of ideassoulfiend schrieb:
As I'm currently working on one and a half new D2-related tales, I really can't see myself revisiting this one. The entire premise doesn't really appeal to me anymore, I'm afraid. Sorry
Do note that it doesn't actually say it's her neck that breaks
It is implied, of course. I can't recall exactly what I was thinking there; the scene as a whole strikes me as somewhat poorly thought-out nowadays anyway, and in dire need of being rewritten. (Attacking some stranger with a dagger? Worst Rogue ever!) Which of course won't happen. Probably. 
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